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BrokenWing


Inscrit le: 16 Oct 2005
Messages: 49
Le 08 Fév 1:30

My heart is certainly not the first to be broken
My eyes are surely not the first to cry
Now it seems like I'm so far away of what we call heaven
Because there is simply no more you and I...

Screaming memories are still running in my head
And I still remember what you once said
"I will always be totally yours, my dear
And I swear, our love will only grows with years"

And, how surprising, guess what, now you're leaving
Man, tell me why you still keep on lying
Look what you did boy, just look at me
And see how empty I am without you, I feel so lonely

Oh gosh, it seems like a painfully nightmare
Baby, explain me how the love we once shared
Without any good-byes, could have disapear
Letting us all by ourself, alone in a cold breeze

Keep on walking, forget everything about him they said
And finally fet rid of all the deepest pain he made
Man, how can I forget the biggest part of myself
The only thing I ever wanted, nothing more but nothing less..

Keep on walking and never look back
Keep on walking and just forget my past...
Keep on walking means run away from you...
Keep on walking,a thing I will never be able to do...

There it is.. my first poem in english yeah.. and I'm sorry if there is many mistakes I didn't see.. it just that usually.. I write in french.. So.. hope you'll have a good reading.. !
Lokishiva


Inscrit le: 26 Jan 2007
Messages: 5
Le 13 Fév 0:36

I find it good for a first poem!!
the style is great too!
keep on writing!
Ruthiana


Inscrit le: 12 Fév 2007
Messages: 33
Le 15 Fév 18:16

i dont know what to say the only thing is you do good job.can you please teach me how to do one like that? IF YES PLEASE CONTACT ME AT RUTIANALABELLE@YAHOO.COM
THANK. KEEP ON WRITING.
Ruthiana


Inscrit le: 12 Fév 2007
Messages: 33
Le 15 Fév 18:16

i dont know what to say the only thing is you do good job.can you please teach me how to do one like that? IF YES PLEASE CONTACT ME AT RUTIANALABELLE@YAHOO.COM
THANK. KEEP ON WRITING.
Joyride


Inscrit le: 17 Fév 2007
Messages: 14
Le 17 Fév 19:10

i just can say wooooow!! you're amazing!! you really do good job !!! and for your first poem in english!! i don't know many people who can be able to!! you're really talented keep on writing i do loved your style!!!!

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