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Eldhoraz


Inscrit le: 09 Nov 2007
Messages: 7
Le 09 Nov 18:25

Une autre de mes créations.. en anglais cette fois-ci

XXXVIII – Bloody Mary

One of my dreams is to wake up
With blood on hands and shutted up
In a cold and wet and thin cell,
Saying these words out of hell :

“Litlle Bloody Mary,
I have killed your baby !”

Not very far, bodies sliced up,
Pieces and parts of corpses sawed up ;
Just for her son, who was too young,
Bloody Mary loathes this song :

“Little Bloody Mary,
I have killed your baby !”

On midnightmare, hear the horror ;
Light two candles near the mirror ;
Facing the Death and all her lords,
Just sing in voice the ancient words :

“Little Bloody Mary,
I have killed your baby !”

Then you will see, in your reflect,
Curious forms and dark objects ;
Cutting up rough, becoming real,
It’s sweet Mary who comes to kill !
Wakemeup


Inscrit le: 16 Juin 2007
Messages: 150
Le 09 Nov 21:41

You got it! The thing that I don't have catched yet, to put in my english poem....to make them "smell" like english poems. I keep running after it but....it escapes from me!
Bloody Mary , is very well written! Congratulations!

Wakemeup,
Eldhoraz


Inscrit le: 09 Nov 2007
Messages: 7
Le 10 Nov 12:38

En général l'octosyllabe passe assez bien en anglais, et si tu regardes Byron ou Milton, ils font souvent des structures 4/4, et ça sonne assez anglais Wink

Sinon merci pour le compliment Smile

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